Cover of 箱の中のあなた (Hako no Naka no Anata)

Part 2 of 3 · JLPT N3

箱の中のあなた Hako no Naka no Anata, part 2: A Walk to the Lonely Cliff

by Yamakawa Masao · 1,310 characters · from The Stranger in the Viewfinder

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The man asks to photograph the woman, and she suggests a park on the edge of town with a better view of the sea, so they go there. On the steep path he attacks her; she fights him off and kills him with a stone, then covers up the evidence and pushes his body off the cliff. The paper treats it as an accident, and the town soon begins to forget it.

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「ありがとう。そうだ、ひとつ今度こんどはあなたをうつさせて下ください」男おとこは、急きゅうにはしゃぐような声こえをだした。"Thank you. Oh, I know—now let me take one of you," the man said, his voice suddenly almost giddy.

「どうですか。ぜひ、この美うつくしい景色けしきといっしょに」"What do you say? Please, together with this beautiful view."

「あの、……」せいいっぱいの努力どりょくで彼女かのじょはいった。"Um…" It took all her effort to speak.

「あの、こんなところ、そんなにいい景色けしきではありませんわ」"Um, a place like this—it isn't really such a nice view."

「ほう?」"Oh?"

男おとこは、露骨ろこつに興味きょうみをしめす顔かおになった。The man's face showed open interest.

「もっといい景色けしきがあるというんですか」"You mean there's a better view?"

「この先さきに行いくと、海うみが見下みおろせる公園こうえんがあります。……あの、もう町まちはずれなんですけど、そこのほうが」If you go on ahead from here, there's a park that looks down over the sea. …Um, it's already on the edge of town, but over there would be…

「へえ、そいつは知しらなかった。そうですか。じゃ、つれて行いって下ください」"Well, I didn't know that. Is that right? Then please take me there."

公園こうえんといっても、春はるになると桜さくらや梅うめがいっせいに花はなをひらくというだけの、その他たにはなにもない高地こうちだった。It was called a park, but it was only a stretch of high ground where cherry and plum trees all came into bloom together in spring, and there was nothing else.

ただ、夕暮ゆうぐれの淡あわい銀灰色ぎんかいしょくの靄もやのなかに沈しずんで行いく町まちと海うみが、より広ひろく見渡みわたせるだけのことで。It was simply that from there you could see further across the town and the sea as they sank into the pale silver-grey haze of evening.

だが、そこにはいつも人ひとかげがなかった。But there was never a soul there.

彼女かのじょは、背せを硬かたくして先さきに立たった。She went ahead of him, her back stiff.

古ふるい神社じんじゃの裏うらをまわり、近道ちかみちは急きゅうな傾斜けいしゃだった。They went around behind an old shrine, and the shortcut was a steep slope.

大おおきな砂利じゃりが靴くつの裏うらですべって、やっと両側りょうがわの叢くさむらが尽つきかけるあたりまできたとき、慣なれない男おとこは、やはり少すこし喘あえぎはじめていた。Large pieces of gravel slid under their shoes, and by the time they finally reached the point where the long grass on either side was about to give out, the man, who was not used to it, had, as might be expected, begun to pant a little.

「ああ、早はやいなあなた、ちょっと待まって下くださいよ」"Ah, you're fast. Wait a moment, please."

その声こえをきき、彼女かのじょが立たち止どまった直後ちょくごだった。It happened just after she heard his voice and stopped.

男おとこの手てが彼女かのじょの肩かたをつかみ、仰向あおむけに彼女かのじょを叢くさむらのなかに押おし倒たおした。The man's hand seized her shoulder and pushed her down onto her back in the long grass.

「いや! 私わたくし、そういうこときらいなんです! いやなんです!」絞しぼりだすような叫さけび声ごえとともに、彼女かのじょは男おとこをつきとばした。"No! I hate that kind of thing! I don't want it!" With a cry that seemed wrung out of her, she shoved the man away.

だが、男おとこはひるみをみせなかった。But the man did not falter.

男おとこの顔かおが視野しやいっぱいに迫せまって、彼女かのじょはきちがいのようにその顔かおに向むけて抵抗ていこうした。His face pressed in until it filled her vision, and she fought against it like a madwoman.

彼女かのじょにあったものは、ただ必死ひっしな、猛烈もうれつな、一ひとつの嫌悪けんおだった。All that was in her was a single desperate, violent disgust.

気きづいたとき、彼女かのじょは右手みぎてにしっかりと大おおきな石いしを握にぎりしめて、ぜいぜいと呼吸こきゅうをきらしていた。When she came to herself, she was gripping a large stone tightly in her right hand and gasping for breath.

男おとこは足あしもとに倒たおれていた。The man lay collapsed at her feet.

こめかみから血ちの筋すじを滴したたらせて、男おとこの目めはぽかんと空そらを見みていた。A thread of blood trickled from his temple, and his eyes stared blankly at the sky.

男おとこは動うごかなかった。The man did not move.

まだ胸むねがはずんでいた。Her heart was still pounding.

でも、もう恐怖感きょうふかんはなかった。But she no longer felt any fear.

彼女かのじょは、やっぱり、私わたくしはいざとなると理性的りせいてきな女おんななのだ、理性的りせいてきでしかないのだ、と思おもった。She thought: just as I suspected, when it comes to it I am a rational woman—I am nothing but rational.

これはしようがないのだ。There was nothing to be done about it.

彼女かのじょは、男おとこのポケットから落おちたタバコの箱はこを戻もどし、脱ぬげた靴くつをはかせ、ずるずると引ひきずって崖がけの尖端せんたんに置おくと、そこまでの軌跡きせきや二人ふたりの争あらそいの跡あとを注意ちゅういぶかく消けした。She put back the packet of cigarettes that had fallen from his pocket, put his shoes back on where they had come off, dragged him heavily to the very edge of the cliff and left him there, then carefully erased the trail to that spot and the marks of their struggle.

それから、カメラをそっと自分じぶんのハンドバッグにしまって身みづくろいを直なおした。Then she quietly put the camera away in her handbag and straightened her clothes.

そして、そっと横よこたわった男おとこの背中せなかを押おしてやった。And she gently gave the man's back a push where he lay.

男おとこは突つき出でた岩角いわかどにぶつかりながら落おちて行いって、やがて、かすかに鈍にぶい水みずの音おとがひびいた。He fell, striking the jutting corners of rock, and before long a faint, dull sound of water echoed up.

翌日よくじつ、夕刊ゆうかんの地方版ちほうばんに、旅行客りょこうきゃくがあやまって三十さんじゅうメートルの崖がけからすべり落おちて死しんだという記事きじがのった。The next day, the local section of the evening paper carried a report that a tourist had accidentally slipped and fallen to his death from a thirty-metre cliff.

記事きじは簡単かんたんな三さん、四よん行ぎょうのもので、旅行者りょこうしゃの顔写真かおしゃしんもなかった。The article was a brief three or four lines, and there was not even a photograph of the traveller's face.

そこはここ数すう年ねん、市民しみんたちのあいだで、「魔まの断崖だんがい」と呼よばれている場所ばしょで、だが、そんな危険きけんな箇所かしょをもつ公園こうえんでの観光客かんこうきゃくの事故じこについては、もっぱらかれらのふところを財源ざいげんとし、かれらの足あしが遠とおのくのをおそれる市当局しとうきょくの圧力あつりょくもあってか、新聞しんぶんも警察けいさつも、今度こんどもそれ以上いじょうは深ふかくふれず事ことをすまそうとしていた。For some years now the spot had been called "the Devil's Cliff" among the townspeople, yet when it came to accidents involving tourists in a park with such a dangerous place, perhaps partly because of pressure from the city authorities, who relied on the visitors' wallets for their revenue and feared that they might stop coming, the newspapers and the police were once again trying to settle the matter without looking any deeper.

その事件じけんは、男おとこの水死体すいしたいの検屍けんしがすみ、身みもとの照会しょうかいも終おわり、噂話うわさばなしもすみ、一週間いっしゅうかんもたつころには、そろそろ人ひとびとから忘わすれられようとしていた。Once the inquest on the drowned man's body was done, his identity confirmed and the gossip exhausted, the incident, a week or so later, was gradually beginning to be forgotten.

Vocabulary

WordMeaningJLPT
露骨ろこつopen, undisguised, blatantOften slightly negative: showing feelings too plainly.N1
見下せるみおろすto look down over (a view), to overlookdictionary form: 見下ろすRead みくだす, the same kanji means 'to look down on, despise'.N2
町はずれまちはずれedge of town, outskirtsdictionary form: 町外れ—
靄もやhaze, mistThinner than 霧 (きり, fog).—
人かげひとかげsign of a person, figuredictionary form: 人影人かげがない = not a soul around.—
喘ぎあえぐto pant, gasp for breathdictionary form: 喘ぐ—
押し倒したおしたおすto push someone down (onto their back); here part of an attempted assaultdictionary form: 押し倒す—
ひるみひるみflinching, falteringdictionary form: 怯みNoun from the verb 怯む (ひるむ, to flinch).—
嫌悪けんおdisgust, loathing—
理性的りせいてきrational, governed by reason—
身づくろいみづくろいtidying one's clothes and appearancedictionary form: 身繕い—
夕刊ゆうかんevening edition of a newspaperThe morning edition is 朝刊 (ちょうかん).N2
ふところふところ(here) one's purse, money (i.e. what tourists spend)dictionary form: 懐Literally the breast of a kimono, where money was kept.—
検屍けんしexamination of a body, inquestNow usually written 検死.—

Grammar

〜させて下さい N4 please let me ~

The causative て-form plus 下さい asks for permission to do something yourself. The man politely asks to be allowed to photograph her.

ひとつ今度はあなたをうつさせて下さい

now let me take one of you

〜といっても N3 although it is called ~, actually…

This introduces a label and then corrects the impression it gives. The place is called a park, but it is really just bare high ground.

公園といっても、春になると桜や梅がいっせいに花をひらくというだけの、その他にはなにもない高地だった。

It was called a park, but it was only a stretch of high ground where cherry and plum trees all came into bloom together in spring, and there was nothing else.

〜かける N2 to be about to ~, half-~

Verb stem + かける means an action has begun but is not finished, or is just about to happen. 尽きかける means the grass is on the verge of giving out.

やっと両側の叢が尽きかけるあたりまできたとき

when they finally reached the point where the grass on either side was about to give out

〜でしかない N2 nothing but ~, merely ~

This strongly limits something to a single quality. She sees herself as only rational and capable of nothing else.

理性的でしかないのだ

I am nothing but rational

〜てやる N4 to do ~ (for/to someone lower)

Normally this means doing a favour for someone of lower status. Here it gives the deadly push a chilling tone of gentle helpfulness.

そっと横たわった男の背中を押してやった。

she gently gave the man's back a push where he lay.

〜ようとしていた N3 was about to ~, was on the point of ~

Volitional form + としていた means something was about to happen or was on the verge of happening. Combined with the passive, 忘れられようとしていた means the incident was on the verge of being forgotten.

そろそろ人びとから忘れられようとしていた。

it was gradually beginning to be forgotten.