溺れかけた兄妹有島武郎

Part 1 of 5 · JLPT N3

溺れかけた兄妹 Obore Kaketa Kyōdai, part 1: A Last Swim at the Empty Beach

by Arishima Takeo · 1,468 characters · from The Undertow

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In early September, after the summer visitors have gone home, the narrator, his little sister and his friend M ignore their grandmother's warning and go down to the empty beach for one last swim. The swell is high and the pull of the receding water is strong, but the children find it thrilling and wade out, hand in hand, until the water reaches their waists and they have to float up over each wave.

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土用波どようなみという高たかい波なみが風かぜもないのに海岸かいがんに打寄うちよせる頃ころになると、海水浴かいすいよくに来きている都みやこの人ひとたちも段々だんだん別荘べっそうをしめて帰かえってゆくようになります。When the season comes for the tall dog-day swells to roll in on the shore even though there is no wind, the city people who have come down for sea bathing gradually begin closing up their villas and going home.

今いままでは海岸かいがんの砂すなの上うえにも水みずの中なかにも、朝あさから晩ばんまで、沢山たくさんの人ひとが集つどって来きて、砂山すなやまからでも見みていると、あんなに大勢おおぜいな人間にんげんが一いったい何所どこから出でて来きたのだろうと不思議ふしぎに思おもえるほどですが、九きゅう月がつにはいってから三みっ日か目めになるその日ひには、見みわたすかぎり砂浜すなはまの何所どこにも人ひとっ子こ一人ひとりいませんでした。Until then, from morning till night, crowds of people would gather both on the sand of the beach and in the water, so many that if you looked down from the dunes you could only wonder where on earth so many people had come from; but on that day, the third day of September, there was not a single soul anywhere on the sand as far as the eye could see.

私わたしの友達ともだちのMと私わたくしと妹いもうととはお名残なごりだといって海水浴かいすいよくにゆくことにしました。My friend M, my little sister and I decided to go for a swim, as a farewell to the sea.

お婆様ばあさまが波なみが荒あらくなって来くるから行ゆかない方ほうがよくはないかと仰有おっしゃったのですけれども、こんなにお天気てんきはいいし、風かぜはなしするから大丈夫だいじょうぶだといって仰有おっしゃることを聞きかずに出でかけました。Grandmother said that the waves would be getting rough, and would it not be better not to go; but we told her that with the weather so fine and no wind at all we would be quite all right, and off we went without listening to what she said.

丁度ちょうど昼ひる少すこし過すぎで、上じょう天気てんきで、空そらには雲くも一ひとつありませんでした。It was just a little past noon, the weather was glorious, and there was not a single cloud in the sky.

昼間ひるまでも草くさの中なかにはもう虫むしの音ねがしていましたが、それでも砂すなは熱あつくって、裸足はだしだと時々ときどき草くさの上うえに駈かけ上あがらなければいられないほどでした。Even in the daytime the insects were already singing in the grass, and yet the sand was so hot that, barefoot, we had to dash up onto the grass every now and then.

Mはタオルを頭あたまからかぶってどんどん飛とんで行いきました。M threw a towel over his head and raced off ahead.

私わたくしは麦稈帽子むぎわらぼうしを被かぶった妹いもうとの手てを引ひいてあとから駈かけました。I took my sister, who was wearing a straw hat, by the hand and ran after him.

少すこしでも早はやく海うみの中なかにつかりたいので三さん人にんは気息いきを切きって急いそいだのです。We wanted to get into the sea even a moment sooner, so the three of us hurried along until we were out of breath.

紆波うねりといいますね、その波なみがうっていました。There was what they call a swell, you know—the waves were rolling in like that.

ちゃぷりちゃぷりと小ちいさな波なみが波打際なみうちぎわでくだけるのではなく、少すこし沖おきの方ほうに細長ほそながい小山こやまのような波なみが出来できて、それが陸りくの方ほうを向むいて段々だんだん押寄おしよせて来くると、やがてその小山こやまのてっぺんが尖とがって来きて、ざぶりと大おおきな音おとをたてて一度いちどに崩くずれかかるのです。Instead of little waves lapping and breaking at the water's edge, a long, narrow wave like a low hill would form a little way out, and as it came pressing steadily towards the land, its top would soon grow sharp, and then with a great crash the whole thing would come tumbling down at once.

そうすると暫しばらく間まをおいてまたあとの波なみが小山こやまのように打寄うちよせて来きます。Then, after a short pause, the next wave would come rolling in like another hill.

そして崩くずれた波なみはひどい勢いきおいで砂すなの上うえに這はい上あがって、そこら中じゅうを白しろい泡あわで敷しきつめたようにしてしまうのです。And the broken wave would rush up over the sand with terrible force, leaving everything around looking as if it had been carpeted with white foam.

三さん人にんはそうした波なみの様子ようすを見みると少すこし気味きみ悪わるくも思おもいました。When the three of us saw the waves behaving like that, we felt a little uneasy.

けれども折角せっかくそこまで来きていながら、そのまま引返ひきかえすのはどうしてもいやでした。But having come all that way, we simply could not bear to turn back just like that.

で、妹いもうとに帽子ぼうしを脱ぬがせて、それを砂すなの上うえに仰向あおむけにおいて、衣物きものやタオルをその中なかに丸まるめこむと私わたしたち三さん人にんは手てをつなぎ合あわせて水みずの中なかにはいってゆきました。So I had my sister take off her hat, set it upside down on the sand, bundled our clothes and towels into it, and then the three of us joined hands and walked into the water.

「ひきがしどいね」"The pull's awful strong, isn't it?"

とMがいいました。said M.

本当ほんとうにその通とおりでした。And it really was.

ひきとは水みずが沖おきの方ほうに退ひいて行いく時ときの力ちからのことです。By "the pull" I mean the force of the water as it draws back out to sea.

それがその日ひは大変たいへん強つよいように私わたしたちは思おもったのです。We thought it was very strong that day.

踝くるぶしくらいまでより水みずの来こない所ところに立たっていても、その水みずが退しりぞいてゆく時ときにはまるで急きゅうな河かわの流ながれのようで、足あしの下したの砂すながどんどん掘ほれるものですから、うっかりしていると倒たおれそうになる位くらいでした。Even standing where the water came no higher than our ankles, when it drew back it was just like a swift river current, and the sand under our feet was scooped away so fast that if we were careless we very nearly fell over.

その水みずの沖おきの方ほうに動うごくのを見みていると眼めがふらふらしました。Watching the water move out to sea made my eyes swim.

けれどもそれが私わたしたちには面白おもしろくってならなかったのです。But we found it more fun than we could say.

足あしの裏うらをくすむるように砂すなが掘ほれて足あしがどんどん深ふかく埋うずまってゆくのがこの上うえなく面白おもしろかったのです。Nothing could have been more fun than feeling the sand being scooped away as if it were tickling the soles of our feet, and our feet sinking deeper and deeper.

三さん人にんは手てをつないだまま少すこしずつ深ふかい方ほうにはいってゆきました。Still holding hands, the three of us went little by little into deeper water.

沖おきの方ほうを向むいて立たっていると、膝ひざの所ところで足あしがくの字じに曲まがりそうになります。If we stood facing out to sea, our legs nearly buckled at the knees.

陸りくの方ほうを向むいていると向脛むこうずねにあたる水みずが痛いたい位くらいでした。If we faced the shore, the water striking our shins almost hurt.

両足りょうあしを揃そろえて真直まっすぐに立たったままどっちにも倒たおれないのを勝かちにして見みたり、片足かたあしで立たちっこをして見みたりして、三さん人にんは面白おもしろがって人魚にんぎょのように跳はね廻まわりました。Sometimes we made a game of standing up straight with both feet together, and whoever did not fall either way won; sometimes we had contests standing on one leg; and the three of us had a wonderful time, leaping about like mermaids.

その中うちにMが膝位ひざぐらいの深ふかさの所ところまで行いって見みました。Before long M tried going out to where the water was about knee-deep.

そうすると紆波うねりが来くる度たびごとにMは脊延せのびをしなければならないほどでした。Then every time a swell came, M had to stretch himself up on tiptoe.

それがまた面白おもしろそうなので私わたしたちも段々だんだん深味ふかみに進すすんでゆきました。That looked like fun too, so we also moved gradually into deeper water.

そして私わたしたちはとうとう波なみのない時ときには腰位こしぐらいまで水みずにつかるほどの深味ふかみに出でてしまいました。And at last we had gone out so deep that, when there was no wave, the water came up to our waists.

そこまで行いくと波なみが来きたらただ立たっていたままでは追付おっつきません。Once we were that far out, simply standing still was not enough when a wave came.

どうしてもふわりと浮うき上あがらなければ水みずを呑のませられてしまうのです。Unless we floated lightly up, we were sure to get a mouthful of water.

Vocabulary

WordMeaningJLPT
土用波どようなみhigh late-summer swells (dog-day waves)土用 is the hottest stretch of midsummer; these big swells come from distant typhoons, often with no wind on the shore.—
打寄せるうちよせる(of waves) to roll in, break on the shoredictionary form: 打ち寄せる—
別荘べっそうvilla, summer houseN2
人っ子一人ひとっこひとり(not) a single soulAlways used with a negative: 人っ子一人いない.—
お名残なごりfarewell; a last chance before partingdictionary form: 名残お名残だ = 'as a farewell (to summer/the sea)'.N1
仰有ったおっしゃるto say (honorific)dictionary form: 仰有るUsually written おっしゃる today; 仰有る is an old kanji spelling.N4
気息を切っていきをきるto get out of breath, pantdictionary form: 息を切るThe kanji 気息 are given the reading いき.—
紆波うねりswell, rolling wavesdictionary form: うねりNormally written in kana; this kanji spelling is unusual.—
沖おきthe open sea, offshore沖の方 = 'out towards the open sea'.N3
気味悪くきみわるいuneasy, creepy, unsettlingdictionary form: 気味悪い—
折角せっかくhaving gone to the trouble; with so much effortExpresses reluctance to waste effort already made.N2
しどいしどいterrible, awful (= ひどい)Dialect/colloquial pronunciation of ひどい, typical of the Tokyo area.—
くすむるくすむるto tickle (= くすぐる)Old or dialect form of くすぐる.—
深味ふかみdeep water, the deeper partdictionary form: 深みToday usually written 深み.—

Grammar

〜ようになる N4 to come to (do), begin to

Attached to a plain verb, it marks a gradual change into a new habit or state. Here, as the season turns, the visitors come to leave one after another.

海水浴に来ている都の人たちも段々別荘をしめて帰ってゆくようになります。

the city people who have come for sea bathing gradually begin closing up their villas and going home.

〜ない方がよくはないか N4 wouldn't it be better not to…?

This is 〜ない方がいい ('you'd better not') turned into a gentle negative question, so it is softer advice. It suits the grandmother's polite, careful tone.

行かない方がよくはないかと仰有ったのですけれども

she said would it not be better not to go, but

〜ていながら N2 even though, despite having…

ながら after a te-iru stem gives a concessive meaning: although one situation holds, something contrary follows. Together with 折角, it stresses that turning back would waste the effort of coming.

折角そこまで来ていながら、そのまま引返すのはどうしてもいやでした。

Having come all that way, we simply could not bear to turn back just like that.

〜てならない N2 can't help feeling…, extremely

After an adjective or feeling verb in te-form, it means the feeling is so strong it cannot be held back. 面白くって is a colloquial form of 面白くて.

けれどもそれが私たちには面白くってならなかったのです。

But we found it more fun than we could say.

〜たまま N4 while still…, remaining as is

Verb in ta-form + まま means a state continues unchanged while something else happens. The children keep holding hands as they wade deeper.

三人は手をつないだまま少しずつ深い方にはいってゆきました。

Still holding hands, the three of us went little by little into deeper water.

〜なければ〜てしまう N3 unless…, (something bad) will end up happening

The conditional なければ ('unless') sets the requirement, and てしまう marks the unwanted result. The causative-passive 呑ませられる means 'be made to swallow', i.e. the sea forces water into you.

どうしてもふわりと浮き上らなければ水を呑ませられてしまうのです。

Unless we floated lightly up, we were sure to get a mouthful of water.