Cover of 月夜のでんしんばしら (Tsukiyo no Denshinbashira)

Part 2 of 3 · JLPT N2

月夜のでんしんばしら Tsukiyo no Denshinbashira, part 2: A Strange Old Man Leads the March

by Miyazawa Kenji · 1,395 characters · from The Night the Telegraph Poles Marched

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The telegraph poles march past Kyōichi in high spirits, singing their stiff old marching songs, and the moon comes out and lights up the scene. A small yellow-faced old man in a ragged grey coat appears, drilling the poles with barked commands. He then offers friendship and a handshake. When Kyōichi timidly gives his hand, he gets a powerful electric shock, which the old man says is only the weakest kind, and the boy is left trembling with fear.

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二人ふたりはしかたなくよろよろあるきだし、つぎからつぎとはしらがどんどんやって来きます。The two had no choice but to stagger off, and pole after pole came marching steadily on.

「ドッテテドッテテ、ドッテテド"Dottete-dottete, dottete-do,

やりをかざれるとたん帽ぼう"Our tin helmets crowned with spears,

すねははしらのごとくなり。"Our shins stand straight as pillars stand.

ドッテテドッテテ、ドッテテド"Dottete-dottete, dottete-do,

肩かたにかけたるエボレット"The epaulettes upon our shoulders

重おもきつとめをしめすなり。」"Proclaim the weighty duty that we bear."

二人ふたりの影かげももうずうっと遠とおくの緑青ろくしょういろの林はやしの方ほうへ行いってしまい、月つきがうろこ雲ぐもからぱっと出でて、あたりはにわかに明あかるくなりました。The two shadows had already gone far, far away toward the verdigris-green woods, the moon burst out from the mackerel clouds, and all at once everything around grew bright.

でんしんばしらはもうみんな、非常ひじょうなご機嫌きげんです。By now the telegraph poles were all in tremendously high spirits.

恭一きょういちの前まえに来くると、わざと肩かたをそびやかしたり、横よこめでわらったりして過すぎるのでした。When they came up in front of Kyōichi, they would make a show of squaring their shoulders, or smirk at him out of the corners of their eyes as they went by.

ところが愕おどろいたことは、六本ろっぽんうで木きのまた向むこうに、三本さんぼんうで木きのまっ赤かなエボレットをつけた兵隊へいたいがあるいていることです。But what was astonishing was that, further off beyond the poles with six crossarms, there were soldiers with three crossarms and bright red epaulettes marching along.

その軍歌ぐんかはどうも、ふしも歌うたもこっちの方ほうとちがうようでしたが、こっちの声こえがあまり高たかいために、何なにをうたっているのか聞ききとることができませんでした。Their marching song seemed to differ from this side's in both tune and words, but the singing on this side was so loud that it was impossible to make out what they were singing.

こっちはあいかわらずどんどんやって行いきます。This side kept marching steadily on just as before.

「ドッテテドッテテ、ドッテテド、"Dottete-dottete, dottete-do,

寒さむさはだえをつんざくも"Though bitter cold should pierce our skin,

などて腕木うでぎをおろすべき"Why ever should we lower our arms?

ドッテテドッテテ、ドッテテド"Dottete-dottete, dottete-do,

暑あつさ硫黄いおうをとかすとも"Though heat should melt the brimstone down,

いかでおとさんエボレット。」"How could we drop our epaulettes?"

どんどんどんどんやって行いき、恭一きょういちは見みているのさえ少すこしつかれてぼんやりなりました。On and on and on they marched, until Kyōichi grew a little tired just from watching, and his mind went hazy.

でんしんばしらは、まるで川かわの水みずのように、次つぎから次つぎとやって来きます。The telegraph poles kept coming, one after another, just like the water of a river.

みんな恭一きょういちのことを見みて行いくのですけれども、恭一きょういちはもう頭あたまが痛いたくなってだまって下したを見みていました。Every one of them looked at Kyōichi as it went by, but by now Kyōichi's head had begun to ache, and he just stared silently at the ground.

俄にわかに遠とおくから軍歌ぐんかの声こえにまじって、Suddenly, mixed in with the sound of the marching song far away,

「お一二いちに、お一二いちに、」というしわがれた声こえがきこえてきました。came a hoarse voice calling, "Hup-two, hup-two!"

恭一きょういちはびっくりしてまた顔かおをあげてみますと、列れつのよこをせいの低ひくい顔かおの黄きいろなじいさんがまるでぼろぼろの鼠ねずみいろの外套がいとうを着きて、でんしんばしらの列れつを見みまわしながらStartled, Kyōichi looked up again, and there, alongside the column, came a short old man with a yellow face, wearing a mouse-grey overcoat that was nothing but rags, looking the line of telegraph poles up and down

「お一二いちに、お一二いちに、」と号令ごうれいをかけてやってくるのでした。and barking out the command, "Hup-two, hup-two!"

じいさんに見みられた柱はしらは、まるで木きのように堅かたくなって、足あしをしゃちほこばらせて、わきめもふらず進すすんで行いき、その変へんなじいさんは、もう恭一きょういちのすぐ前まえまでやってきました。Any pole the old man looked at went as stiff as a block of wood, locked its legs rigid, and marched on without so much as a sideways glance, and the strange old man had now come right up in front of Kyōichi.

そしてよこめでしばらく恭一きょういちを見みてから、でんしんばしらの方ほうへ向むいて、Then, after eyeing Kyōichi sideways for a while, he turned toward the telegraph poles

「なみ足あしい。おいっ。」と号令ごうれいをかけました。and barked, "Ordinary ti-ime! Hup!"

そこででんしんばしらは少すこし歩調ほちょうを崩くずして、やっぱり軍歌ぐんかを歌うたって行いきました。At that, the telegraph poles loosened their step a little and carried on, still singing their marching song.

「ドッテテドッテテ、ドッテテド、"Dottete-dottete, dottete-do,

右みぎとひだりのサアベルは"The sabres hung at right and left

たぐいもあらぬ細身ほそみなり。」"Are slender past compare."

じいさんは恭一きょういちの前まえにとまって、からだをすこしかがめました。The old man stopped in front of Kyōichi and bent down a little.

「今晩こんばんは、おまえはさっきから行軍こうぐんを見みていたのかい。」"Evening. You've been watching the march for a while now, have you?"

「ええ、見みてました。」"Yes, I've been watching."

「そうか、じゃ仕方しかたない。ともだちになろう、さあ、握手あくしゅしよう。」"I see. Well then, it can't be helped. Let's be friends. Come on, let's shake on it."

じいさんはぼろぼろの外套がいとうの袖そでをはらって、大おおきな黄きいろな手てをだしました。The old man brushed back the sleeve of his ragged overcoat and held out a big yellow hand.

恭一きょういちもしかたなく手てを出だしました。Kyōichi had no choice but to hold out his hand too.

じいさんが「やっ、」と云いってその手てをつかみました。The old man said "Hah!" and grabbed it.

するとじいさんの眼めだまから、虎とらのように青あおい火花ひばながぱちぱちっとでたとおもうと、恭一きょういちはからだがびりりっとしてあぶなくうしろへ倒たおれそうになりました。Then blue sparks crackled out of the old man's eyes like a tiger's, and the next moment a jolt went tingling through Kyōichi's body and he very nearly fell over backward.

「ははあ、だいぶひびいたね、これでごく弱よわいほうだよ。わしとも少すこし強つよく握手あくしゅすればまあ黒焦くろこげだね。」"Aha, gave you a good jolt, eh? And that's only the very weakest kind. If you and I shook just a bit harder, well, you'd be burnt to a crisp."

兵隊へいたいはやはりずんずん歩あるいて行いきます。The soldiers kept striding steadily on all the same.

「ドッテテドッテテ、ドッテテド、"Dottete-dottete, dottete-do,

タールを塗ぬれるなが靴くつの"Our tall boots, all daubed with tar,

歩ほはばは三百六十さんびゃくろくじゅう尺しゃく。」"Stride three hundred and sixty feet."

恭一きょういちはすっかりこわくなって、歯はががちがち鳴なりました。Kyōichi was now thoroughly frightened, and his teeth chattered.

じいさんはしばらく月つきや雲くもの工合ぐあいをながめていましたが、あまり恭一きょういちが青あおくなってがたがたふるえているのを見みて、気きの毒どくになったらしく、少すこししずかに斯こう云いいました。For a while the old man gazed at the moon and the clouds, but when he saw how pale Kyōichi had turned and how hard he was shaking, he seemed to feel sorry for him, and spoke a little more gently, like this:

Vocabulary

WordMeaningJLPT
にわかににわかにsuddenly, all at oncedictionary form: 俄かにA literary word. The same word appears in kanji as 俄かに later in the passage.—
ご機嫌ごきげんgood mood, high spirits非常なご機嫌です means 'in tremendously high spirits'.—
そびやかしそびやかすto square or raise (one's shoulders) proudlydictionary form: そびやかすAlmost always used in 肩をそびやかす, a swaggering, self-important gesture.—
軍歌ぐんかmilitary song, marching song軍 'army' + 歌 'song'.—
あいかわらずあいかわらずas before, as usual, stilldictionary form: 相変わらずN2
腕木うでぎcrossarm (the horizontal bar on a telegraph pole)Literally 'arm-wood'. The story treats the crossarms as the poles' arms.—
しわがれたしわがれるto become hoarse or husky (of a voice)dictionary form: 嗄れるUsually written in kana. しわがれた声 means 'a hoarse voice'.—
外套がいとうovercoatOld-fashioned. Today コート is the usual word.—
号令ごうれいword of command, order (as in a drill)号令をかける means 'to call out a command'.—
しゃちほこばらせてしゃちほこばるto stiffen, to hold oneself rigidlydictionary form: しゃちほこばるComes from the stiff, arched shachihoko fish ornaments on castle roofs. This form is the causative て-form, 'making (the legs) go rigid'.—
わきめもふらずわきめもふらずwithout looking aside, single-mindedlydictionary form: 脇目も振らずA fixed expression: 'not even a sideways glance'.—
行軍こうぐんa military march—
黒焦げくろこげburnt black, charred to a crispFrom 黒 'black' and 焦げる 'to scorch'.—
気の毒きのどくpitiful; feeling sorry for someone気の毒になる means 'to come to feel sorry (for someone)'.N3

Grammar

〜のごとくなり N1 is like ~, as ~ (classical)

ごとく is the adverbial form of classical ごとし, 'like, as'. Followed by classical なり 'is', it forms a literary simile, equivalent to modern 〜のようだ. It gives the song its stiff, old-fashioned tone.

すねははしらのごとくなり。

"Our shins stand straight as pillars stand.

〜たる / 〜れる (classical perfective modifier) N1 ~ed, which has been ~ (attributive)

In classical Japanese, たる (from たり) and れる (from り) attach to verbs to describe a resulting state before a noun. かけたる means modern かけている 'worn on', and かざれる and 塗れる mean 'decorated with' and 'painted with'.

肩にかけたるエボレット

"The epaulettes upon our shoulders

などて〜べき N1 why should one ~? (rhetorical: one never should)

べき expresses what one ought to do. Here it is the classical attributive ending that goes with the question word などて 'why'. The line becomes a rhetorical question, 'why should we lower our arms?', meaning 'we would never lower our arms'. The classical いかで〜ん, a little later in the song, works the same way: いかでおとさん 'how could we ever drop them?'

などて腕木をおろすべき

"Why ever should we lower our arms?

〜とも / 〜も (concessive) N1 even if ~, though ~

In literary style, とも after a verb means 'even if (it should happen)'. Plain も after a verb gives the same 'although' meaning in the earlier verse (つんざくも). Modern Japanese would say 〜ても.

暑さ硫黄をとかすとも

"Though heat should melt the brimstone down,

〜たり〜たりする N4 do things like ~ and ~

This pattern lists typical actions as examples, without claiming the list is complete. Here it describes the various cheeky things the poles do as they pass Kyōichi.

わざと肩をそびやかしたり、横めでわらったりして過ぎるのでした

they would make a show of squaring their shoulders, or smirk at him out of the corners of their eyes as they went by

〜たとおもうと N2 no sooner had ~ than ...; the moment ~

Used after a past-tense verb, (か)と思うと means a second event follows the first almost at once. The next event in the sentence is Kyōichi's shock, which ends in 倒れそうになりました, 'nearly fell over'.

虎のように青い火花がぱちぱちっとでたとおもうと

the moment blue sparks crackled out like a tiger's