Cover of 赤い蝋燭と人魚 (Akai Rōsoku to Ningyo)

Part 2 of 5 · JLPT N3

赤い蝋燭と人魚(二) Akai Rōsoku to Ningyo, part 2: A Foundling on the Shrine Steps

by Ogawa Mimei · 1,302 characters · from Red Candles on the Shrine Hill

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An old couple in a small seaside town make and sell candles below a hill where a shrine stands among pine trees. One moonlit night the old woman goes up to pray and finds a baby crying at the foot of the stone steps. The baby is a girl whose body is a fish's from the waist down, and the couple take her in as a gift from the god and raise her into a beautiful, gentle, clever child.

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海岸かいがんに小ちいさな町まちがありました。On the shore there was a small town.

町まちにはいろいろな店みせがありましたが、お宮みやのある山やまの下したに小ちいさな蝋燭ろうそくを商あきなっている店みせがありました。The town had all sorts of shops, and at the foot of the hill where the shrine stood there was a little shop that sold candles.

その家いえには年としよりの夫婦ふうふが住すんでいました。An old husband and wife lived in that house.

お爺じいさんが蝋燭ろうそくを造つくって、お婆ばあさんが店みせで売うっていたのであります。The old man made the candles, and the old woman sold them in the shop.

この町まちの人ひとや、また附近ふきんの漁師りょうしがお宮みやへお詣まいりをする時ときに、この店みせに立寄たちよって蝋燭ろうそくを買かって山やまへ上のぼりました。Whenever the people of the town, or the fishermen from round about, went to pray at the shrine, they would stop at this shop, buy candles, and then climb the hill.

山やまの上うえには、松まつの木きが生はえていました。Pine trees grew on the top of the hill.

その中なかにお宮みやがありました。Among the pines stood the shrine.

海うみの方ほうから吹ふいて来くる風かぜが、松まつの梢こずえに当あたって、昼ひるも夜よるもごうごうと鳴なっています。The wind blowing in from the sea struck the tops of the pines, and day and night they roared.

そして、毎晩まいばんのように、そのお宮みやにあがった蝋燭ろうそくの火影ほかげがちらちらと揺ゆらめいていますのが、遠とおい海うみの上うえから望のぞまれたのであります。And almost every night the light of the candles offered at the shrine could be seen flickering from far out on the sea.

ある夜よるのことでありました。It happened one night.

お婆ばあさんはお爺じいさんに向むかって、The old woman turned to the old man

「私達わたしたちがこうして、暮くらしているのもみんな神かみ様さまのお蔭かげだ。このお山やまにお宮みやがなかったら、蝋燭ろうそくが売うれない。私わたくし共どもは有ありがたいと思おもわなければなりません。そう思おもったついでに、お山やまへ上のぼってお詣まいりをして来きます」と、言いいました。and said, "We owe it all to the god that we can live the way we do. If there were no shrine on this hill, our candles would not sell. We must be grateful. And now that I have thought of it, I will go up the hill and say a prayer."

「ほんとうに、お前まえの言いうとおりだ。私わたくしも毎日まいにち、神かみ様さまを有ありがたいと心こころでお礼れいを申もうさない日ひはないが、つい用事ようじにかまけて、たびたびお山やまへお詣まいりに行いきもしない。いいところへ気きが付つきなされた。私わたくしの分ぶんもよくお礼れいを申もうして来きておくれ」と、お爺じいさんは答こたえました。"You are quite right," the old man answered. "Not a day goes by that I do not thank the god in my heart, but I get so caught up in my work that I seldom go up the hill to pray. It is a fine thing you have thought of. Please give thanks properly on my behalf as well."

お婆ばあさんは、とぼとぼと家いえを出でかけました。The old woman set off from the house with slow, tottering steps.

月つきのいい晩ばんで、昼間ひるまのように外そとは明あかるかったのであります。It was a night of fine moonlight, and outside it was as bright as day.

お宮みやへおまいりをして、お婆ばあさんは山やまを降おりて来きますと、石段いしだんの下したに赤あかん坊ぼうが泣ないていました。When the old woman had prayed at the shrine and was coming back down the hill, she found a baby crying at the foot of the stone steps.

「可哀かわいそうに捨児すてごだが、誰だれがこんな処ところに捨すてたのだろう。それにしても不思議ふしぎなことは、おまいりの帰かえりに私わたくしの眼めに止とまるというのは何なんかの縁えんだろう。"The poor little thing has been abandoned. Who could have left it in a place like this? And how strange that it should catch my eye on my way back from praying. There must be some bond of fate in this.

このままに見捨みすて行いっては神かみ様さまの罰ばちが当あたる。きっと神かみ様さまが私達わたしたち夫婦ふうふに子供こどものないのを知しって、お授さずけになったのだから帰かえってお爺じいさんと相談そうだんをして育そだてましょう」と、お婆ばあさんは、心こころの中うちで言いって、赤あかん坊ぼうを取とり上あげると、If I walked away and left it as it is, the god would surely punish me. The god must know that we have no children and has given us this one. I will take it home, talk it over with the old man, and we will raise it," the old woman said to herself, and she picked the baby up,

「おお可哀かわいそうに、可哀かわいそうに」と、言いって、家うちへ抱いだいて帰かえりました。saying, "Oh, you poor thing, you poor little thing," and carried it home in her arms.

お爺じいさんは、お婆ばあさんの帰かえるのを待まっていますと、お婆ばあさんが赤あかん坊ぼうを抱いだいて帰かえって来きました。The old man was waiting for the old woman to come back, when she came home carrying a baby in her arms.

そして一部いちぶ始終しじゅうをお婆ばあさんはお爺じいさんに話はなますと、Then the old woman told the old man everything from beginning to end,

「それは、まさしく神かみ様さまのお授さずけ子こだから、大事だいじにして育そだてなければ罰ばちが当あたる」と、お爺じいさんも申もうしました。and the old man said too, "This is surely a child given to us by the god, so if we do not raise it with care, we shall be punished."

二人ふたりは、その赤あかん坊ぼうを育そだてることにしました。The two of them decided to bring up the baby.

その子こは女おんなの児こであったのであります。The child was a girl.

そして胴どうから下したの方ほうは、人間にんげんの姿すがたでなく、魚さかなの形かたちをしていましたので、お爺じいさんも、お婆ばあさんも、話はなしに聞きいている人魚にんぎょにちがいないと思おもいました。And from the waist down she did not have a human form but the shape of a fish, so the old man and the old woman both thought she must be one of the mermaids they had heard of in tales.

「これは、人間にんげんの子こじゃあないが……」と、お爺じいさんは、赤あかん坊ぼうを見みて頭あたまを傾かたむけました。"This is no human child, but…" said the old man, looking at the baby and tilting his head in puzzlement.

「私わたくしもそう思おもいます。しかし人間にんげんの子こでなくても、なんというやさしい、可愛かわいらしい顔かおの女おんなの子こでありましょう」と、お婆ばあさんは言いいました。"I think so too," said the old woman. "But even if she is not a human child, what a gentle, lovely face this little girl has!"

「いいとも何なんでも構かまわない、神かみ様さまのお授さずけなさった子供こどもだから大事だいじにして育そだてよう。きっと大おおきくなったら、怜悧りこうないい子こになるにちがいない」と、お爺じいさんも申もうしました。"Yes, indeed, it makes no difference at all," said the old man. "She is a child the god has given us, so we will raise her with loving care. When she grows up, she is sure to be a clever, good girl."

その日ひから、二人ふたりは、その女おんなの子こを大事だいじに育そだてました。From that day on, the two of them raised the girl with loving care.

子供こどもは、大おおきくなるにつれて黒眼勝くろめがちな美うつくしい、頭髪かみのけの色いろのツヤツヤとした、おとなしい怜悧れいりな子ことなりました。As she grew, the child became beautiful, with large dark eyes and glossy, shining hair, and she was gentle and clever.

Vocabulary

WordMeaningJLPT
商っているあきなうto deal in, to selldictionary form: 商うA somewhat literary verb; compare 商売 (しょうばい, trade) and 商人 (しょうにん, merchant).—
お宮みやShinto shrinedictionary form: 宮With お it is a familiar word for a shrine, close in meaning to 神社.—
お詣りまいりvisiting a shrine to praydictionary form: 詣りUsually written お参り today; the story also uses the kana spelling おまいり.—
立寄ってたちよるto drop in, to stop by on the waydictionary form: 立ち寄るN1
梢こずえtreetop, tips of the branchesN1
火影ほかげfirelight, the glow of a flameHere 影 means 'light', not 'shadow', as in the old word 月影 (moonlight).—
お蔭おかげthanks to (someone's help or blessing)Survives in the everyday phrase おかげさまで.N4
かまけてかまけるto be too busy with something (to do anything else)dictionary form: かまけるUsed as 〜にかまけて, usually as an excuse for neglecting something.—
とぼとぼとぼとぼtrudging, walking with slow, weary stepsA mimetic word, often used of old or tired people.—
捨児すてごabandoned child, foundlingdictionary form: 捨て子—
縁えんfate, a destined connectionA Buddhist-flavoured idea that meetings happen for a reason; 何かの縁 means 'it must be fate'.N1
罰ばちdivine punishment罰が当たる (ばちがあたる) is 'to be punished by the gods'. As ばつ it means an ordinary penalty.N1
一部始終いちぶしじゅうthe whole story, from beginning to end—
怜悧れいりclever, brightA literary word. In the previous sentence the same kanji carry the reading りこう, the usual word for 'clever'.—

Grammar

〜のであります N2 explanatory 'it is that…' in a formal narrative style

であります is a very formal, old-fashioned form of です. Attached to の, it gives explanation or emphasis, and it lends the storyteller a solemn, deliberate voice.

お爺さんが蝋燭を造って、お婆さんが店で売っていたのであります。

The old man made the candles, and the old woman sold them in the shop.

〜たら (conditional) N4 if ~

なかったら is the conditional of ない. Here it sets up a hypothetical situation that is contrary to fact: if the shrine were not there, the candles would not sell.

このお山にお宮がなかったら、蝋燭が売れない。

If there were no shrine on this hill, our candles would not sell.

〜なければなりません N4 must ~, have to ~

A double negative ('if we do not…, it will not do') that expresses obligation. The old woman uses it to say they have a duty to be grateful.

私共は有がたいと思わなければなりません。

We must be grateful.

〜ない日はない N3 there is no day when one does not ~ (i.e. every single day)

The double negative is a strong affirmative. The old man stresses that he gives thanks in his heart every day.

神様を有がたいと心でお礼を申さない日はない

Not a day goes by that I do not thank the god in my heart

〜にちがいない N3 must be ~, surely ~

Expresses a strong conviction reached by reasoning. Seeing the fish's tail, the couple conclude that the baby must be a mermaid.

話に聞いている人魚にちがいないと思いました。

They thought she must be one of the mermaids they had heard of in tales.

〜につれて N3 as ~ (one change accompanies another)

Links two gradual changes, here growing up and becoming beautiful and clever. It attaches to the dictionary form of a verb.

子供は、大きくなるにつれて黒眼勝な美しい、頭髪の色のツヤツヤとした、おとなしい怜悧な子となりました。

As she grew, the child became beautiful, with large dark eyes and glossy, shining hair, and she was gentle and clever.