Cover of 赤い蝋燭と人魚 (Akai Rōsoku to Ningyo)

Part 3 of 5 · JLPT N3

赤い蝋燭と人魚(三) Akai Rōsoku to Ningyo, part 3: The Painted Candles and the Shrine

by Ogawa Mimei · 1,290 characters · from Red Candles on the Shrine Hill

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The mermaid girl grows up hidden away, and she begins painting red pictures on the old man's candles, which sell remarkably well. A rumour spreads that a painted candle stub offered at the hilltop shrine protects sailors from shipwreck, and the shrine becomes famous far and wide. The girl paints until her hands ache, grateful to the old couple, yet no one thinks of her, and on moonlit nights she weeps with longing for the northern sea.

AI translation · independently checked

娘むすめは、大おおきくなりましたけれど、姿すがたが変かわっているので恥はずかしがって顔かおを出だしませんでした。The girl grew up, but because she looked different from other people, she was shy and would not show her face.

けれど一目ひとめその娘むすめを見みた人ひとは、みんなびっくりするような美うつくしい器量きりょうでありましたから、中なかにはどうかしてその娘むすめを見みようと思おもって、蝋燭ろうそくを買かいに来きた者ものもありました。Yet anyone who caught even a single glimpse of her was astonished at how beautiful she was, and some people even came to buy candles in the hope of somehow seeing her.

お爺じいさんや、お婆ばあさんは、The old man and the old woman

「うちの娘むすめは、内気うちきで恥はずかしがりやだから、人ひと様さまの前まえには出でないのです」と、言いっていました。would say, "Our daughter is timid and bashful, so she does not come out in front of people."

奥おくの間までお爺じいさんは、せっせと蝋燭ろうそくを造つくっていました。In the back room the old man worked busily away at making candles.

娘むすめは、自分じぶんの思おもい付つきで、きっと絵えを描かいたら、みんなが喜よろこんで蝋燭ろうそくを買かうだろうと思おもいましたから、そのことをお爺じいさんに話はなますと、そんならお前まえの好すきな絵えをためしに書かいて見みるがいいと答こたえました。The girl had an idea of her own: surely, if she painted pictures on the candles, everyone would be delighted to buy them. When she told the old man about it, he answered that in that case she should try painting whatever pictures she liked.

娘むすめは、赤あかい絵具えのぐで、白しろい蝋燭ろうそくに、魚さかなや、貝かいや、また海草かいそうのようなものを産うまれつき誰だれにも習ならったのでないが上手じょうずに描えがきました。With red paint, on the white candles, she painted fish and shells and things like seaweed. Although she had never learned from anyone, she painted them skilfully, as if by a gift she was born with.

お爺じいさんは、それを見みるとびっくりいたしました。When the old man saw them, he was astonished.

誰だれでも、その絵えを見みると、蝋燭ろうそくがほしくなるように、その絵えには、不思議ふしぎな力ちからと美うつくしさとが籠こもっていたのであります。There was a mysterious power and beauty in those pictures, so that anyone who saw them found themselves wanting the candles.

「うまい筈はずだ、人間にんげんではない人魚にんぎょが描えがいたのだもの」と、お爺じいさんは感嘆かんたんして、お婆ばあさんと話はなし合あいました。"No wonder they are so fine. They were painted by a mermaid, not a human being," said the old man in admiration, and he talked it over with the old woman.

「絵えを描えがいた蝋燭ろうそくをおくれ」と、言いって、朝あさから、晩ばんまで子供こどもや、大人おとながこの店頭みせさきへ買かいに来きました。"Give me a candle with a picture on it!" people would say, and from morning until night children and grown-ups came to the shop to buy them.

果はたして、絵えを描えがいた蝋燭ろうそくは、みんなに受うけたのであります。Sure enough, the painted candles were a great hit with everyone.

するとここに不思議ふしぎな話はなしがありました。And then a strange story began to go around.

この絵えを描えがいた蝋燭ろうそくを山やまの上うえのお宮みやにあげてその燃もえさしを身みに付つけて、海うみに出でると、どんな大暴風雨おおあらしの日ひでも決けっして船ふねが顛覆てんぷくしたり溺おぼれて死しぬような災難さいなんがないということが、いつからともなくみんなの口々くちぐちに噂うわさとなって上のぼりました。It was said that if you offered one of these painted candles at the shrine on top of the hill and carried its burnt stub with you when you went to sea, then even on a day of the fiercest storm your boat would never capsize, and you would meet no misfortune such as drowning. No one knew when this rumour began, but it came to be on everyone's lips.

「海うみの神かみ様さまを祭まつったお宮みや様さまだもの、綺麗きれいな蝋燭ろうそくをあげれば、神かみ様さまもお喜よろこびなさるのにきまっている」と、その町まちの人々ひとびとは言いいました。"It is a shrine to the god of the sea, after all. If you offer him beautiful candles, of course the god will be pleased," said the people of the town.

蝋燭ろうそく屋やでは、絵えを描えがいた蝋燭ろうそくが売うれるのでお爺じいさんは、一生いっしょう懸命けんめいに朝あさから晩ばんまで蝋燭ろうそくを造つくりますと、傍かたわらで娘むすめは、手ての痛いたくなるのも我慢がまんして赤あかい絵具えのぐで絵えを描えがいたのであります。Because the painted candles sold so well, the candle shop was busy. The old man made candles with all his might from morning till night, and beside him the girl painted pictures in red paint, bearing the ache in her hands.

「こんな人間にんげん並なみでない自分じぶんをも、よく育そだて可愛かわいがって下くだすったご恩おんを忘わすれてはならない」と、娘むすめはやさしい心こころに感かんじて、大おおきな黒くろい瞳ひとみをうるませたこともあります。"I must never forget the kindness of those who raised me and loved me so well, even though I am not like other people," the girl would think in her gentle heart, and at times her large black eyes grew moist with tears.

この話はなしは遠とおくの村むらまで響ひびきました。This story reached even distant villages.

遠方えんぽうの船乗ふなのりやまた、漁師りょうしは、神かみ様さまにあがった絵えを描えがいた蝋燭ろうそくの燃もえさしを手てに入いれたいものだというので、わざわざ遠とおい処ところをやって来きました。Sailors and fishermen from far away wished to obtain the stub of a painted candle that had been offered to the god, and so they made the long journey on purpose.

そして、蝋燭ろうそくを買かって、山やまに登のぼり、お宮みやに参詣さんけいして、蝋燭ろうそくに火ひをつけて捧ささげ、その燃もえて短みじかくなるのを待まって、またそれを戴いただいて帰かえりました。They would buy candles, climb the hill, and pay their respects at the shrine. There they lit the candles and offered them up, waited until they had burned down short, and then reverently took the stubs home.

だから、夜よるとなく、昼ひるとなく、山やまの上うえのお宮みやには、蝋燭ろうそくの火ひの絶たえたことはありません。And so, by night and by day, the shrine on top of the hill was never without the light of candles.

殊ことに、夜よるは美うつくしく燈火とうかの光ひかりが海うみの上うえからも望のぞまれたのであります。At night especially, the beautiful glow of the lights could be seen even from far out on the sea.

「ほんとうに有ありがたい神かみ様さまだ」と、いう評判ひょうばんは世間せけんに立たちました。"He is truly a gracious god," people said, and the shrine's fame spread through the world.

それで、急きゅうにこの山やまが名高なだかくなりました。And so this hill suddenly became famous.

神かみ様さまの評判ひょうばんはこのように高たかくなりましたけれど、誰だれも、蝋燭ろうそくに一心いっしんを籠こめて絵えを描えがいている娘むすめのことを思おもう者ものはなかったのです。But though the god's fame grew so great, no one gave a thought to the girl who was painting the candles with her whole heart.

従したがってその娘むすめを可哀かわいそうに思おもった人ひとはなかったのであります。And so there was no one who felt sorry for her.

娘むすめは、疲つかれて、折々おりおりは月つきのいい夜よるに、窓まどから頭あたまを出だして、遠とおい、北きたの青あおい青あおい海うみを恋こいしがって涙なみだぐんで眺ながめていることもありました。The girl grew weary, and sometimes on moonlit nights she would put her head out of the window and gaze, with tears in her eyes, longing for the far-off, blue, blue sea of the north.

Vocabulary

WordMeaningJLPT
器量きりょうlooks, beauty (especially of a woman)Older usage; 器量よし means 'a beauty'. It can also mean 'ability' or 'calibre'.—
内気うちきtimid, shy, reservedA na-adjective describing someone's temperament.—
せっせとせっせとbusily, diligently, without a breakN2
思い付きおもいつきan idea that comes to mind, a notionFrom 思い付く 'to think of, hit upon'.N1
産れつきうまれつきby nature, from birthdictionary form: 生まれつきWritten here with the older kanji 産; modern writing uses 生まれつき.N1
燃えさしもえさしthe burnt stub of a candle or stickA key story word. 〜さし means 'partly done', as in 食べさし 'half-eaten food'.—
噂うわさrumour, talkN3
災難さいなんmisfortune, disaster, mishapN2
恩おんa debt of gratitude, kindness receivedご恩を忘れない means 'never to forget the kindness one owes to someone'.N3
参詣さんけいvisiting a shrine or temple to worshipA formal word; 参詣する means 'to go and pray at a shrine'.—
評判ひょうばんreputation, fame, public talk評判が立つ means 'word gets around'.N3
涙ぐんでなみだぐむto be moved to tears, to have tears welling updictionary form: 涙ぐむ—

Grammar

〜てみるがいい N2 you should try doing ~; go ahead and ~

The plain form followed by がいい gives advice or permission with a slightly old-fashioned, fatherly tone. Here it combines with 〜てみる 'try doing', so the old man is encouraging the girl to give it a try.

そんならお前の好きな絵をためしに書いて見るがいいと答えました

he answered that in that case she should try painting whatever pictures she liked

〜はずだ/〜だもの N3 no wonder ~ / because, after all ~

Here 筈だ expresses that a result makes sense once the reason is known ('no wonder'). The sentence-final もの gives that reason in a familiar, explanatory tone.

うまい筈だ、人間ではない人魚が描いたのだもの

No wonder they are so fine. They were painted by a mermaid, not a human being.

いつからともなく N1 from no one knows when; before anyone knew it

Question word + ともなく means that the when, where or who is unclear. The rumour started at some unknown moment and simply spread.

いつからともなくみんなの口々に噂となって上りました

No one knew when this rumour began, but it came to be on everyone's lips.

〜てはならない N3 must not ~

A strong, formal prohibition, used here as the girl's own resolve. It is stronger and more solemn than 〜てはいけない.

ご恩を忘れてはならない

I must never forget the kindness.

〜たいものだ N3 would really like to ~; how one longs to ~

Adding ものだ to 〜たい makes the wish sound deeper and more heartfelt. Here it is followed by というので ('saying that, and so') to give the sailors' reason for travelling.

燃えさしを手に入れたいものだというので、わざわざ遠い処をやって来ました

They wished to obtain the stub, and so they made the long journey on purpose.

〜となく〜となく N1 whether ~ or ~; regardless of ~

Two paired nouns with となく mean 'without distinction between A and B', that is, all the time. The expression is literary.

夜となく、昼となく、山の上のお宮には、蝋燭の火の絶えたことはありません

By night and by day, the shrine on top of the hill was never without the light of candles.