Cover of 赤いろうそくと人魚 (Akai Rōsoku to Ningyo)

Part 3 of 5 · JLPT N3

赤いろうそくと人魚(三) Akai Rōsoku to Ningyo, part 3: Painted Candles and a Hillside Shrine

by Ogawa Mimei · 1,419 characters · from The Mermaid and the Crimson Candles

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The mermaid girl grows up hidden away because she is shy of her unusual form. She begins painting red pictures on the old man's candles, and they sell wonderfully. A rumour spreads that painted candle stubs offered at the hill shrine protect sailors from storms, and the shrine becomes famous. No one thinks of the tired girl, who secretly longs for the northern sea.

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娘むすめは、大おおきくなりましたけれど、姿すがたが変かわっているので、恥はずかしがって顔かおを外そとへ出だしませんでした。The girl grew up, but because her form was different, she was shy and would not show her face outside.

けれど、一目ひとめその娘むすめを見みた人ひとは、みんなびっくりするような美うつくしい器量きりょうでありましたから、中なかにはどうかしてその娘むすめを見みたいと思おもって、ろうそくを買かいにきたものもありました。Yet her looks were so beautiful that anyone who caught even a single glimpse of her was astonished, and so there were some who came to buy candles in the hope of somehow seeing her.

おじいさんや、おばあさんは、The old man and the old woman

「うちの娘むすめは、内気うちきで恥はずかしがりやだから、人ひとさまの前まえには出でないのです。」といっていました。would say, "Our daughter is timid and bashful, so she does not come out before other people."

奥おくの間までおじいさんは、せっせとろうそくを造つくっていました。In the back room, the old man busily went on making candles.

娘むすめは、自分じぶんの思おもいつきで、きれいな絵えを描かいたら、みんなが喜よろこんで、ろうそくを買かうだろうと思おもいましたから、そのことをおじいさんに話はなしますと、そんならおまえの好すきな絵えを、ためしにかいてみるがいいと答こたえました。The girl had an idea of her own: if she painted pretty pictures on the candles, everyone would be pleased and buy them. When she told the old man so, he answered, "Well then, you had best try painting whatever pictures you like."

娘むすめは、赤あかい絵えの具ぐで、白しろいろうそくに、魚さかなや、貝かいや、または海草かいそうのようなものを、産うまれつきで、だれにも習ならったのではないが上手じょうずに描えがきました。With red paint, on the white candles, the girl painted fish and shells and things like seaweed, and she painted them skilfully, by a gift she was born with, though no one had ever taught her.

おじいさんは、それを見みるとびっくりいたしました。When the old man saw them, he was astonished.

だれでも、その絵えを見みると、ろうそくがほしくなるように、その絵えには、不思議ふしぎな力ちからと、美うつくしさとがこもっていたのであります。For those pictures held a strange power and beauty, so that anyone who looked at them came to want the candles.

「うまいはずだ。人間にんげんではない、人魚にんぎょが描かいたのだもの。」と、おじいさんは感嘆かんたんして、おばあさんと話はなし合あいました。"No wonder they are so fine. She is no human being; it was a mermaid who painted them," said the old man in admiration, and he talked it over with the old woman.

「絵えを描かいたろうそくをおくれ。」といって、朝あさから晩ばんまで、子供こどもや、大人おとながこの店頭みせさきへ買かいにきました。"Give me one of the painted candles," people would say, and from morning till night children and grown-ups came to the shop front to buy them.

はたして、絵えを描かいたろうそくは、みんなに受うけたのであります。Just as they had expected, the painted candles were a great success with everyone.

すると、ここに不思議ふしぎな話はなしがありました。Then a strange story arose.

この絵えを描かいたろうそくを山やまの上うえのお宮みやにあげて、その燃もえさしを身みにつけて、海うみに出でると、どんな大暴風雨だいぼうふううの日ひでも、けっして、船ふねが転覆てんぷくしたり、おぼれて死しぬような災難さいなんがないということが、いつからともなく、みんなの口々くちぐちに、うわさとなって上のぼりました。No one knew quite when it began, but a rumour came to be on everyone's lips: if you offered one of these painted candles at the shrine on top of the hill and carried its burnt-down stub with you when you went to sea, then however fierce the storm, your boat would never capsize and no misfortune such as drowning would ever befall you.

「海うみの神かみさまを祭まつったお宮みやさまだもの、きれいなろうそくをあげれば、神かみさまもお喜よろこびなさるのにきまっている。」と、その町まちの人々ひとびとはいいました。"It is a shrine to the god of the sea, after all. If we offer beautiful candles, the god is sure to be pleased," said the people of the town.

ろうそく屋やでは、ろうそくが売うれるので、おじいさんはいっしょうけんめいに朝あさから晩ばんまで、ろうそくを造つくりますと、そばで娘むすめは、手ての痛いたくなるのも我慢がまんして、赤あかい絵えの具ぐで絵えを描かいたのであります。Because the candles sold so well at the candle shop, the old man worked with all his might from morning till night making them, and beside him the girl painted the pictures in red, enduring it even when her hands grew sore.

「こんな、人間並にんげんなみでない自分じぶんをも、よく育そだてて、かわいがってくだすったご恩おんを忘わすれてはならない。」と、娘むすめは、老夫婦ろうふうふのやさしい心こころに感かんじて、大おおきな黒くろい瞳ひとみをうるませたこともあります。"I must never forget the kindness they have shown in raising and loving someone like me, who is not even a proper human being," the girl thought, and at times, moved by the old couple's gentle hearts, her large black eyes filled with tears.

この話はなしは遠とおくの村むらまで響ひびきました。The story spread as far as distant villages.

遠方えんぽうの船乗ふなのりや、また漁師りょうしは、神かみさまにあがった、絵えを描かいたろうそくの燃もえさしを手てに入いれたいものだというので、わざわざ遠とおいところをやってきました。Sailors and fishermen from far-off places, wishing to obtain the stub of a painted candle that had been offered to the god, made the long journey on purpose to get one.

そして、ろうそくを買かって山やまに登のぼり、お宮みやに参詣さんけいして、ろうそくに火ひをつけてささげ、その燃もえて短みじかくなるのを待まって、またそれをいただいて帰かえりました。They bought candles, climbed the hill and paid their respects at the shrine, lit the candles and offered them, waited until they had burned down short, and then reverently took them home.

だから、夜よるとなく、昼ひるとなく、山やまの上うえのお宮みやには、ろうそくの火ひの絶たえたことはありません。And so, by night and by day alike, the candle flames never once went out at the shrine on top of the hill.

殊ことに、夜よるは美うつくしく、燈火ともしびの光ひかりが海うみの上うえからも望のぞまれたのであります。At night especially it was beautiful, and the glow of the lights could be seen even from far out on the sea.

「ほんとうに、ありがたい神かみさまだ。」という評判ひょうばんは、世間せけんにたちました。Word spread through the world that this was "truly a god who grants blessings."

それで、急きゅうにこの山やまが名高なだかくなりました。And so the hill suddenly became famous.

神かみさまの評判ひょうばんは、このように高たかくなりましたけれど、だれも、ろうそくに一心いっしんをこめて絵えを描かいている娘むすめのことを、思おもうものはなかったのです。Yet although the god's fame had grown so great, no one gave a thought to the girl who was pouring her whole heart into painting pictures on the candles.

したがって、その娘むすめをかわいそうに思おもった人ひとはなかったのであります。And so there was no one who felt any pity for her.

娘むすめは、疲つかれて、おりおりは、月つきのいい夜よるに、窓まどから頭あたまを出だして、遠とおい、北きたの青あおい、青あおい、海うみを恋こいしがって、涙なみだぐんでながめていることもありました。The girl grew weary, and now and then, on nights when the moon was fine, she would put her head out of the window and gaze, her eyes wet with tears, longing for the far-off, blue, blue northern sea.

Vocabulary

WordMeaningJLPT
器量きりょうlooks, beauty (of a face)Old-fashioned word for someone's looks, especially a woman's. It can also mean ability or capacity.—
内気うちきtimid, shy, reservedLiterally 'inward spirit'. Used as a な-adjective.—
恥ずかしがりやはずかしがりやa bashful persondictionary form: 恥ずかしがり屋〜屋 attached to a verb stem describes a type of person, as in 寂しがり屋 'someone who gets lonely easily'.—
せっせとせっせとbusily, diligently, without a breakN2
思いつきおもいつきan idea that comes to mind, a notionN1
産まれつきうまれつきby nature, from birthdictionary form: 生まれつきUsually written 生まれつき today.N1
こもっていたこもるto be contained or filled with (feeling, power)dictionary form: こもるRelated to 心をこめる, 'to put one's heart into something'.N1
燃えさしもえさしa partly burnt stub (of a candle)〜さし attached to a verb stem means 'left partway done', as in 飲みさし.—
転覆てんぷくcapsizing, overturning—
災難さいなんmisfortune, disasterN2
参詣さんけいvisiting a shrine or temple to worship—
評判ひょうばんreputation, public talk評判がたつ means 'a reputation spreads'.N3
一心いっしんwholehearted devotion一心をこめて means 'with one's whole heart'.N1
恋しがってこいしがるto long for, to yearn fordictionary form: 恋しがるThe suffix 〜がる turns an adjective of feeling (恋しい) into a verb that describes someone else's feelings.—

Grammar

〜てみるがいい N2 you should try ~; go ahead and ~

〜がいい after a plain verb gives permission or advice from an older or higher-status speaker. Here the old man encourages the girl to try painting.

ためしにかいてみるがいい

you had best try painting

〜はずだ N4 no wonder; it stands to reason

Here はずだ does not predict anything. It shows that the speaker has found the reason for something that surprised him: of course she paints well, because she is a mermaid.

うまいはずだ。

No wonder they are so fine.

〜のだもの N3 because, after all (giving a reason)

〜もの at the end of a sentence gives a reason in a conversational, slightly emotional way. The same pattern appears in the townspeople's お宮さまだもの.

人魚が描いたのだもの。

it was a mermaid who painted them, after all.

〜にきまっている N3 is sure to ~; must certainly ~

This expresses strong certainty based on the speaker's own judgement. The townspeople are confident the god will be pleased.

神さまもお喜びなさるのにきまっている。

the god is sure to be pleased.

〜てはならない N3 must not ~

This is a formal prohibition, often used for moral duties. Here the girl uses it about herself: she must never forget the old couple's kindness.

ご恩を忘れてはならない。

I must never forget their kindness.

AとなくBとなく N1 whether A or B; regardless of A or B

This literary pattern pairs two opposite nouns to mean 'at all times, without distinction'. Here it stresses that the candles burned constantly, both day and night.

夜となく、昼となく、山の上のお宮には、ろうそくの火の絶えたことはありません。

By night and by day alike, the candle flames never once went out at the shrine on top of the hill.