Cover of 赤いろうそくと人魚 (Akai Rōsoku to Ningyo)

Part 5 of 5 · JLPT N3

赤いろうそくと人魚(五) Akai Rōsoku to Ningyo, part 5: The Pale Woman and the Cursed Shrine

by Ogawa Mimei · 1,474 characters · from The Mermaid and the Crimson Candles

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Late one night a pale woman with dripping wet hair buys a red candle from the old couple and pays with seashells. That night a terrible storm wrecks countless ships, and the old couple fear for the ship carrying the mermaid girl. From then on, red candles lit at the shrine bring storms and death, people stop visiting it, and within a few years the town at the foot of the hill falls to ruin.

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ほんとうに穏おだやかな晩ばんのことです。It happened on a truly calm night.

おじいさんとおばあさんは、戸とを閉しめて、寝ねてしまいました。The old man and the old woman had shut the door and gone to sleep.

真夜中まよなかごろでありました。It was around midnight.

トン、トン、と、だれか戸とをたたくものがありました。Tap, tap: someone was knocking at the door.

年寄としよりのものですから耳みみさとく、その音おとを聞ききつけて、だれだろうと思おもいました。Being old, she was quick to hear things, so she caught the sound and wondered who it could be.

「どなた?」と、おばあさんはいいました。"Who is there?" said the old woman.

けれどもそれには答こたえがなく、つづけて、トン、トン、と戸とをたたきました。But there was no answer, and the knocking went on: tap, tap.

おばあさんは起おきてきて、戸とを細ほそめにあけて外そとをのぞきました。The old woman got up, opened the door a little way, and peeped outside.

すると、一人ひとりの色いろの白しろい女おんなが戸口とぐちに立たっていました。There in the doorway stood a woman with a pale white face.

女おんなはろうそくを買かいにきたのです。The woman had come to buy candles.

おばあさんは、すこしでもお金かねがもうかることなら、けっして、いやな顔かおつきをしませんでした。If there was even a little money to be made, the old woman never showed a sour face.

おばあさんは、ろうそくの箱はこを取とり出だして女おんなに見みせました。The old woman took out the box of candles and showed it to the woman.

そのとき、おばあさんはびっくりしました。Just then, the old woman was startled.

女おんなの長ながい、黒くろい頭髪かみのけがびっしょりと水みずにぬれて、月つきの光ひかりに輝かがやいていたからであります。For the woman's long black hair was soaking wet, and it glistened in the moonlight.

女おんなは箱はこの中なかから、真まっ赤かなろうそくを取とり上あげました。The woman took a deep red candle out of the box.

そして、じっとそれに見入みいっていましたが、やがて金かねを払はらって、その赤あかいろうそくを持もって帰かえってゆきました。She gazed at it intently for a while, but at last she paid her money and went away, taking the red candle with her.

おばあさんは、燈火ともしびのところで、よくその金かねをしらべてみると、それはお金かねではなくて、貝かいがらでありました。When the old woman looked closely at the money by the lamplight, she found that it was not money at all, but seashells.

おばあさんは、だまされたと思おもって、怒おこって、家うちから飛とび出だしてみましたが、もはや、その女おんなの影かげは、どちらにも見みえなかったのであります。Thinking she had been cheated, the old woman flew out of the house in anger, but the woman was already nowhere to be seen, in any direction.

その夜よのことであります。It was that very night.

急きゅうに空そらの模様もようが変かわって、近ちかごろにない大暴風雨おおあらしとなりました。Suddenly the sky changed, and there came a great storm such as had not been seen in years.

ちょうど香具師やしが、娘むすめをおりの中なかに入いれて、船ふねに乗のせて、南みなみの方ほうの国くにへゆく途中とちゅうで、沖おきにあったころであります。It was just at the time when the showman, having put the girl in a cage and taken her aboard ship, was out at sea on his way to a country in the south.

「この大暴風雨おおあらしでは、とても、あの船ふねは助たすかるまい。」と、おじいさんと、おばあさんは、ぶるぶると震ふるえながら、話はなしをしていました。"In a storm like this, that ship can never be saved," the old man and the old woman said to each other, trembling all over.

夜よが明あけると、沖おきは真まっ暗くらで、ものすごい景色けしきでありました。When dawn came, the open sea was pitch dark, a fearful sight to behold.

その夜よ、難船なんせんをした船ふねは、数かぞえきれないほどであります。The ships wrecked that night were beyond counting.

不思議ふしぎなことには、その後のち、赤あかいろうそくが、山やまのお宮みやに点ともった晩ばんは、いままで、どんなに天気てんきがよくても、たちまち大おおあらしとなりました。Strange to say, from then on, on any night when a red candle was lit at the shrine on the hill, however fine the weather had been until then, a great storm would rise at once.

それから、赤あかいろうそくは、不吉ふきつということになりました。After that, red candles came to be thought of as ill-omened.

ろうそく屋やの年としより夫婦ふうふは、神かみさまの罰ばちが当あたったのだといって、それぎり、ろうそく屋やをやめてしまいました。The old couple of the candle shop said it was the punishment of the gods that had fallen on them, and from then on they gave up the candle shop for good.

しかし、どこからともなく、だれが、お宮みやに上あげるものか、たびたび、赤あかいろうそくがともりました。And yet, time and again, red candles were lit at the shrine, though no one knew from where they came or who offered them.

昔むかしは、このお宮みやにあがった絵えの描かいたろうそくの燃もえさしさえ持もっていれば、けっして、海うみの上うえでは災難さいなんにはかからなかったものが、今度こんどは、赤あかいろうそくを見みただけでも、そのものはきっと災難さいなんにかかって、海うみにおぼれて死しんだのであります。In the old days, anyone who merely kept the burnt stub of a painted candle offered at this shrine would never meet with disaster at sea; but now, anyone who so much as saw a red candle would surely meet with disaster and drown in the sea.

たちまち、このうわさが世間せけんに伝つたわると、もはや、だれも、この山やまの上うえのお宮みやに参詣さんけいするものがなくなりました。As soon as this rumour spread through the world, no one came to worship at the shrine on the hill any more.

こうして、昔むかし、あらたかであった神かみさまは、いまは、町まちの鬼門きもんとなってしまいました。And so the god who had once worked such wonders now became the town's unlucky quarter, a place of ill fortune.

そして、こんなお宮みやが、この町まちになければいいものと、うらまぬものはなかったのであります。And there was no one who did not bear a grudge against it, wishing that the town had no such shrine.

船乗ふなのりは、沖おきから、お宮みやのある山やまをながめておそれました。Sailors gazed from the open sea at the hill where the shrine stood, and were afraid.

夜よるになると、この海うみの上うえは、なんとなくものすごうございました。When night came, the sea here was somehow dreadful.

はてしもなく、どちらを見みまわしても、高たかい波なみがうねうねとうねっています。Endlessly, whichever way one looked, high waves rolled and heaved.

そして、岩いわに砕くだけては、白しろいあわが立たち上あがっています。And breaking against the rocks, they threw up white foam.

月つきが、雲間くもまからもれて波なみの面おもてを照てらしたときは、まことに気味悪きみわるうございました。When the moon slipped out between the clouds and lit the face of the waves, it was eerie indeed.

真まっ暗くらな、星ほしもみえない、雨あめの降ふる晩ばんに、波なみの上うえから、赤あかいろうそくの灯ひが、漂ただよって、だんだん高たかく登のぼって、いつしか山やまの上うえのお宮みやをさして、ちらちらと動うごいてゆくのを見みたものがあります。Some people saw, on pitch-dark, starless, rainy nights, the flame of a red candle drifting up from the waves, climbing higher and higher, and before they knew it, flickering its way toward the shrine on the hilltop.

幾年いくねんもたたずして、そのふもとの町まちはほろびて、滅なくなってしまいました。Before many years had passed, the town at the foot of the hill fell into ruin and vanished.

Vocabulary

WordMeaningJLPT
耳さとくみみざといsharp-eared, quick to heardictionary form: 耳聡い聡い means 'quick, sharp'; here in the continuative く form linking to the next clause.—
細めほそめnarrowly, just a little (of an opening)戸を細めにあける = to open the door a crack.—
もうかるもうかるto be profitable, to make moneydictionary form: 儲かるIntransitive; the transitive partner is 儲ける.N2
見入ってみいるto gaze intently at, to be absorbed in lookingdictionary form: 見入るTakes に: それに見入る.—
香具師やしtravelling showman, peddler at fairsAn irregular reading; the kanji do not suggest the sound. Such people ran stalls and sideshows at festivals.—
難船なんせんshipwreck難船をする = to be shipwrecked.—
不吉ふきつunlucky, ill-omenedOpposite of 吉 (good fortune).N1
罰ばちdivine punishment罰が当たる = to be punished by the gods. Read ばつ in the sense of an ordinary penalty.N1
燃えさしもえさしa half-burnt stub, embers〜さし marks something left partway done, as in 読みさし (a book left half-read).—
参詣さんけいa visit to a shrine or temple to worshipFormal word; everyday Japanese often uses お参り.—
あらたかあらたか(of a god) miraculously powerful, efficaciousMostly heard in the set phrase 霊験あらたか.—
鬼門きもんunlucky direction or place; something to be avoidedLiterally 'demon gate', the north-east direction traditionally feared as unlucky.—
うらまぬうらむto resent, to bear a grudge againstdictionary form: 恨むぬ is the classical negative, equal to ない.N2
ほろびてほろびるto fall into ruin, to perishdictionary form: 滅びるUsed for towns, nations or families that come to an end.N1

Grammar

〜まい N2 probably not; surely not

Attached to a verb, まい expresses negative conjecture, like 〜ないだろう. With とても it gives a strong sense that there is no hope at all.

この大暴風雨では、とても、あの船は助かるまい。

In a storm like this, that ship can never be saved.

〜さえ〜ば N3 as long as; if only

さえ marks the one condition that is enough by itself; the ば clause states it. Merely keeping a candle stub was all it took to stay safe at sea.

このお宮にあがった絵の描いたろうそくの燃えさしさえ持っていれば

anyone who merely kept the burnt stub of a painted candle offered at this shrine

〜ぬものはなかった N2 there was no one who did not ~ (= everyone did)

A double negative using the classical negative ぬ. Saying 'no one did not resent it' strongly affirms that everyone did.

うらまぬものはなかったのであります

there was no one who did not bear a grudge against it

adjective + うございます N1 very polite, old-fashioned form of an い-adjective

The adjective's final い changes to う (sometimes with a vowel shift) before ございます: ものすごい → ものすごうございます, 気味悪い → 気味悪うございます. It gives the narration a courteous, old-fashioned tone.

夜になると、この海の上は、なんとなくものすごうございました。

When night came, the sea here was somehow dreadful.

〜ずして N1 without ~ing

A literary form of 〜ないで or 〜ずに. 幾年もたたずして means 'without many years passing', that is, within only a few years.

幾年もたたずして、そのふもとの町はほろびて、滅くなってしまいました。

Before many years had passed, the town at the foot of the hill fell into ruin and vanished.