Cover of 双子の星 (Futago no Hoshi)

Part 8 of 8 · JLPT N2

双子の星 Futago no Hoshi, part 8: Homeward on the Silver Waterspout

by Miyazawa Kenji · 1,653 characters · from The Star Twins by the Silver River

In this part

The sea-serpent king welcomes the twins with great respect, reveals that their King of the Sky is his own master, and sends them home on a Waterspout. On the way they see the wicked comet break apart and fall into the sea to become a sea cucumber. Back in their palaces, the twins apologise to the unseen King, pass on the pleas of the starfish and the sea cucumber, and take up their silver flutes just before dawn.

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「さあ、参まいりましょう。」海蛇うみへびは白髪はくはつを振ふって恭々うやうやしく申もうしました。"Now, let us be going," said the sea serpent, shaking his white hair and speaking with deep respect.

二人ふたりはそれに続つづいてひとでの間あいだを通とおりました。The two followed after him and passed between the starfish.

まもなく蒼あおぐろい水みずあかりの中なかに大おおきな白しろい城しろの門もんがあってその扉とがひとりでに開ひらいて中なかから沢山たくさんの立派りっぱな海蛇うみへびが出でて参まいりました。Before long, in the dark-blue glimmer of the water, there stood the gate of a great white castle; its doors opened of their own accord, and a great many splendid sea serpents came out from within.

そして双子ふたごのお星ほしさまだちは海蛇うみへびの王おうさまの前まえに導みちびかれました。And the twin stars were led before the King of the Sea Serpents.

王おう様さまは白しろい長ながい髯ひげの生はえた老人ろうじんでにこにこわらって云いいました。The King was an old man with a long white beard, and he smiled kindly and said:

「あなた方かたはチュンセ童子どうじにポウセ童子どうじ。よく存ぞんじて居おります。あなた方かたが前まえにあの空そらの蠍さそりの悪わるい心こころを命いのちがけでお直なおしになった話はなしはここへも伝つたわって居おります。私わたくしはそれをこちらの小学校しょうがっこうの読本とくほんにも入いれさせました。さて今度こんどはとんだ災難さいなんで定さだめしびっくりなさったでしょう。」"You are Chunse Dōji and Pōse Dōji. I know of you well. The tale of how you once risked your very lives to mend the wicked heart of the Scorpion up in the sky has reached even us down here. I have even had it put into the readers of our elementary schools. And now you have met with such a dreadful misfortune; you must surely have been greatly startled."

チュンセ童子どうじが申もうしました。Chunse Dōji said:

「これはお語ことば誠まことに恐おそれ入いります。私わたくし共どもはもう天上てんじょうにも帰かえれませんしできます事ことならこちらで何なんなりみなさまのお役やくに立たちたいと存ぞんじます。」"Your words are far too kind, and we are truly humbled. We can no longer go back to the heavens, so if it is at all possible, we should like to be of some service to all of you here."

王おうが云いいました。The King said:

「いやいや、そのご謙遜けんそんは恐おそれ入いります。早速さっそく竜巻たつまきに云いいつけて天上てんじょうにお送おくりいたしましょう。お帰かえりになりましたらあなたの王様おうさまに海蛇うみへびめが宜よろしく申もうし上あげたと仰おっしゃって下ください。」"No, no, such modesty humbles me. I shall at once command the Waterspout to carry you back up to the heavens. When you have returned, please tell your King that this lowly sea serpent sends him his most respectful greetings."

ポウセ童子どうじが悦よろこんで申もうしました。Pōse Dōji said joyfully:

「それでは王様おうさまは私わたくし共どもの王様おうさまをご存ぞんじでいらっしゃいますか。」"Then, Your Majesty, do you know our King?"

王おうはあわてて椅子いすを下くだって申もうしました。The King hurriedly stepped down from his chair and said:

「いいえ、それどころではございません。王おう様さまはこの私わたくしの唯ただ一人ひとりの王おうでございます。遠とおいむかしから私わたくしめの先生せんせいでございます。私わたくしはあのお方かたの愚おろかなしもべでございます。いや、まだおわかりになりますまい。けれどもやがておわかりでございましょう。それでは夜よるの明あけないうちに竜巻たつまきにお伴とも致いたさせます。これ、これ。支度したくはいいか。」"Oh no, it is far more than that. Your King is my one and only King. Since long, long ago he has been my teacher. I am his foolish servant. No, you will not understand it yet. But in time, surely, you will. Now then, I shall have the Waterspout escort you before the night gives way to dawn. Here, here! Are the preparations ready?"

一疋いっぴきのけらいの海蛇うみへびがA sea serpent, one of his retainers,

「はい、ご門もんの前まえにお待まちいたして居おります。」と答こたえました。answered, "Yes, sire, it is waiting before the gate."

二人ふたりは丁寧ていねいに王おうにお辞儀じぎをいたしました。The two bowed politely to the King.

「それでは王様おうさま、ごきげんよろしゅう。いずれ改あらためて空そらからお礼れいを申もうしあげます。このお宮みやのいつまでも栄さかえますよう。」"Farewell then, Your Majesty, and may you be well. One day we shall send you our thanks once more, properly, from the sky. May this palace flourish forever."

王おうは立たって云いいました。The King stood and said:

「あなた方かたもどうかますます立派りっぱにお光ひかり下くださいますよう。それではごきげんよろしゅう。」"And may you, too, shine ever more splendidly. Farewell, then, and be well."

けらいたちが一度いちどに恭々うやうやしくお辞儀じぎをしました。The retainers all bowed respectfully at once.

童子どうじたちは門もんの外そとに出でました。The boys went out through the gate.

竜巻たつまきが銀ぎんのとぐろを巻まいてねています。The Waterspout lay there, coiled in loops of silver.

一人ひとりの海蛇うみへびが二人ふたりをその頭あたまに載のせました。One of the sea serpents set the two of them upon its head.

二人ふたりはその角つのに取とりつきました。The two took hold of its horns.

その時とき赤あかい光ひかりのひとでが沢山たくさん出でて来きて叫さけびました。Just then a great many starfish glowing with red light came out and cried:

「さよなら、どうか空そらの王様おうさまによろしく。私わたくしどももいつか許ゆるされますようおねがいいたします。」"Goodbye! Please give our regards to the King of the Sky. We beg you to ask that we, too, may one day be forgiven."

二人ふたりは一緒いっしょに云いいました。The two said together:

「きっとそう申もうしあげます。やがて空そらでまたお目めにかかりましょう。」"We will be sure to tell him so. Before long we shall meet again in the sky."

竜巻たつまきがそろりそろりと立たちあがりました。The Waterspout rose up slowly, ever so slowly.

「さよなら、さよなら。」"Goodbye, goodbye!"

竜巻たつまきはもう頭あたまをまっくろな海うみの上うえに出だしました。Already the Waterspout had lifted its head above the pitch-black sea.

と思おもうと急きゅうにバリバリバリッと烈はげしい音おとがして竜巻たつまきは水みずと一所いっしょに矢やのように高たかく高たかくはせのぼりました。And then, all at once, with a fierce crackling roar, the Waterspout shot up, water and all, like an arrow, high, high into the sky.

まだ夜よるがあけるのに余程よほど間まがあります。There is still a good while yet before the night will end.

天あまの川がわがずんずん近ちかくなります。The Milky Way draws nearer and nearer.

二人ふたりのお宮みやがもうはっきり見みえます。The two boys' palaces can already be seen clearly.

「一寸ちょっとあれをご覧らんなさい。」と闇やみの中なかで竜巻たつまきが申もうしました。"Just look over there," said the Waterspout in the darkness.

見みるとあの大おおきな青白あおじろい光ひかりのほうきぼしはばらばらにわかれてしまって頭あたまも尾おも胴どうも別々べつべつにきちがいのような凄すごい声こえをあげガリガリ光ひかってまっ黒くろな海うみの中なかに落おちて行いきます。They looked, and there was that great comet of pale blue light, broken all to pieces, its head, tail and body each separately letting out dreadful, crazed cries as they flashed and crackled and fell away into the pitch-black sea.

「あいつはなまこになりますよ。」と竜巻たつまきがしずかに云いいました。"That one will turn into a sea cucumber," the Waterspout said quietly.

もう空そらの星ほしめぐりの歌うたが聞きこえます。Already the song of the circling stars can be heard in the sky.

そして童子どうじたちはお宮みやにつきました。And so the boys arrived at their palaces.

竜巻たつまきは二人ふたりをおろしてThe Waterspout set the two down,

「さよなら、ごきげんよろしゅう」と云いいながら風かぜのように海うみに帰かえって行いきました。and saying, "Goodbye, and be well," it went back to the sea like the wind.

双子ふたごのお星ほしさまはめいめいのお宮みやに昇のぼりました。The twin stars each climbed up into their own palace.

そしてきちんと座すわって見みえない空そらの王様おうさまに申もうしました。Then they sat down neatly and spoke to the unseen King of the Sky.

「私わたくしどもの不注意ふちゅういからしばらく役目やくめを欠かかしましてお申もうし訳わけけございません。それにもかかわらず今晩こんばんはおめぐみによりまして不思議ふしぎに助たすかりました。海うみの王様おうさまが沢山たくさんの尊敬そんけいをお伝つたえして呉くれと申もうされました。それから海うみの底そこのひとでがお慈悲じひをねがいました。又また私わたくしどもから申もうしあげますがなまこももしできますならお許ゆるしを願ねがいとう存ぞんじます。」"Through our own carelessness we neglected our duty for a time, and we are truly sorry. Yet in spite of that, tonight, by Your grace, we were wondrously saved. The King of the Sea asked us to convey his deepest respects to You. And the starfish at the bottom of the sea begged for Your mercy. We also ask this of our own accord: that, if it may be so, the sea cucumber, too, might be forgiven."

そして二人ふたりは銀笛ぎんてきをとりあげました。And the two took up their silver flutes.

東ひがしの空そらが黄金色きんいろになり、もう夜明よあけに間まもありません。The eastern sky turned golden; dawn was very near.

Vocabulary

WordMeaningJLPT
恭々しくうやうやしいrespectful, reverentdictionary form: 恭しいUsually written 恭しい today; describes formal, deferential behaviour such as bowing.—
導かれましたみちびくto lead, to guidedictionary form: 導くHere in the passive: the twins were led before the king.N1
童子どうじboy, childA literary or Buddhist word for a young boy, used here as a title after the twins' names; English has no exact equivalent, so it is kept as 'Dōji'.—
命がけいのちがけat the risk of one's lifedictionary form: 命懸けLiterally 'staking one's life'; used with で as an adverb.—
災難さいなんmisfortune, disasterN2
定めしさだめしsurely, no doubtOld-fashioned adverb, usually followed by でしょう or だろう.—
恐れ入りますおそれいるto be humbled, to feel grateful or overwhelmeddictionary form: 恐れ入るA very polite set phrase for thanks or for accepting praise humbly.N1
謙遜けんそんmodesty, humilityN2
竜巻たつまきwaterspout, whirlwindLiterally 'dragon coil'; in this story it is a living creature with a head and horns.—
しもべしもべservantdictionary form: 僕Old word for a humble servant; do not confuse it with 僕 (ぼく) meaning 'I'.N1
とぐろを巻いてとぐろをまくto lie coiled up (like a snake)dictionary form: とぐろを巻く—
ほうきぼしほうきぼしcometdictionary form: 箒星Literally 'broom star', from the tail's shape; the standard word is 彗星 (すいせい).—
なまこなまこsea cucumberdictionary form: 海鼠—
慈悲じひmercy, compassionOften with the polite prefix: お慈悲をねがう, 'to beg for mercy'.—

Grammar

お〜になる N3 honorific form of a verb

Putting a verb stem between お and になる raises the subject's actions respectfully. The sea-serpent king uses it to speak of the twins' deeds with deference.

あなた方が前にあの空の蠍の悪い心を命がけでお直しになった

how you once risked your lives to mend the wicked heart of the Scorpion in the sky

〜させる (causative) N4 to make or have someone do something

入れる becomes 入れさせる, 'to have (someone) put in'. The king did not write the readers himself but had the story included in them.

私はそれをこちらの小学校の読本にも入れさせました。

I have even had it put into the readers of our elementary schools.

〜ないうちに N3 before something happens, while it has not yet happened

A negative verb plus うちに marks a time limit: the action must be done before the change occurs. Here the twins must leave before dawn breaks.

それでは夜の明けないうちに竜巻にお伴致させます。

Now, I shall have the Waterspout escort you before the night gives way to dawn.

〜ますまい N1 probably will not

まい added to the ます form is a formal, somewhat old-fashioned negative guess, much like ないでしょう. The king politely supposes the twins cannot yet understand.

いや、まだおわかりになりますまい。

No, you will not understand it yet.

〜ますよう(に) N3 may…, I hope that…

Ending a sentence with ますように, or here just ますよう, expresses a wish or prayer. The twins wish the palace lasting prosperity.

このお宮のいつまでも栄えますよう。

May this palace flourish forever.

〜にもかかわらず N2 in spite of, even though

It introduces a result that goes against what the previous situation would lead you to expect. Despite neglecting their duty, the twins were saved.

それにもかかわらず今晩はおめぐみによりまして不思議に助かりました。

Yet in spite of that, tonight, by Your grace, we were wondrously saved.